The Open Door, and the Portrait. Stories of the Seen and the Unseen. — Reading Notes
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ld have pleased my vanity. Oh, yes, I claim no exemption. The girls would have been delighted. I could fancy their eagerness, their interest, and excitement. No; if we had been told, it would have done no good,--we should have made the bargain all the more eagerly, the fools that we are. “And there has been no attempt to investigate it,” I said, “to see what it really is?”
“Eh, Cornel,” said the coachman’s wife, “wha would investigate, as ye call it, a thing that nobody believes in? Ye would be the laughin’-stock of a’ the country-side, as my man says.”
“But you believe in it,” I said, turning upon her hastily. The woman was taken by surprise. She made a step backward out of my way.
“Lord, Cornel, how ye frichten a body! Me!--there’s awfu’ strange things in this world. An unlearned person doesna ken what to think. But the minister and the gentry they just laugh in your face. Inquire into the thing that is not! Na, na, we just let it be.”
“Come with me, Jarvis,” I said hastily, “and we’ll make an attempt at least. Say nothing to the men or to anybody. I’ll come back after dinner, and we’ll make a serious attempt to see what it is, if it is anything. If I hear it,--which I doubt,--you may be sure I shall never rest till I make it out. Be ready for me about ten o’clock.”
“Me, Cornel!” Jarvis said, in a faint voice. I had not been looking at him in my own preoccupation, but when I did so, I found that the greatest change had come over the fat and ruddy coachman. “Me, Cornel!” he repeated, wiping the perspiration from his brow. His ruddy face hung in flabby folds, his knees knocked together, his voice seemed half extinguished in his throat. Then he began to rub his hands and smile upon me in a deprecating, imbecile way. “There’s nothing I wouldna do to pleasure ye, Cornel,” taking a step further back. “I’m sure _she_ kens I’ve aye said I never had to do with a mair fair, weel-spoken gentleman--” Here Jarvis came to a pause, again looking at me, rubbing his hands.
“But eh, sir!” he went on, with the same imbecile yet insinuating smile, “if ye’ll reflect that I am no used to my feet. With a horse atween my legs, or the reins in my hand, I’m maybe nae worse than other men; but on fit, Cornel--It’s no the--bogles--but I’ve been cavalry, ye see,” with a little hoarse laugh, “a’ my life. To face a thing ye dinna understan’--on your feet, Cornel.”
“Well, sir, if _I_ do it,” said I tartly, “why shouldn’t you?”
“Eh, Cornel, there’s an awfu’ difference. In the first place, ye tramp about the haill countryside, and think naething of it; but a walk tires me mair than a hunard miles’ drive; and then ye’re a gentleman, and do your ain pleasure; and you’re no so auld as me; and it’s for your ain bairn, ye see, Cornel; and then--”
“He believes in it, Cornel, and you dinna believe in it,” the woman said.
“Will you come with me?” I said, turning to her.
She jumped back, upsetting her chair in her bewilderment. “Me!” with a scream, and then fell into a sort of hysterical laugh. “I wouldna say but what I would go; but what would the folk say to hear of Cornel Mortimer with an auld silly woman at his heels?”
The suggestion made me laugh too, though I had little inclination for it. “I’m sorry you have so little spirit, Jarvis,” I said. “I must find some one else, I suppose.”
Jarvis, touched by this, began to remonstrate, but I cut him short. My butler was a soldier who had been with me in India, and was not supposed to fear anything,--man or devil,--certainly not the former; and I felt that I was losing time. The Jarvises were too thankful to get rid of me. They attended me to the door with the most anxious courtesies. Outside, the two grooms stood close by, a little confused by my sudden exit. I don’t know if perhaps they had been listening,--at least standing as near as possible, to catch any scrap of the conversation. I waved my hand to them as I went past, in answer to their salutations, and it was very apparent to me that they also were glad to see me go.
Mrs. Oliphant's The Open Door, and the Portrait opens with a narrator who introduces himself as a retired Indian civil servant, describing his family's move to Brentwood with a matter-of-factness that belies the subtitle “Stories of the Seen and the Unseen.” The first paragraphs dwell on practical arrangements—schooling for his son Roland, the healthful Scottish climate—and only gradually admit a note of unease. This deliberate, domestic realism sets a pattern: the extraordinary will emerge not through dramatic rupture but through accumulation of small, overlooked details.
The narrator’s voice is measured, even when recounting the strange. He notes that Brentwood’s drawing-room “had three long windows opening on the lawn” and that it was “a place of deadly good order, into which nobody ever entered.” Such precise observations, repeated across both tales, reward a reader who watches for objects and spaces that carry more weight than the narrator openly acknowledges.
The Narrator’s Retrospective Gaze
The narrator of “The Open Door” speaks from a later point in life, looking back on events he once found puzzling. This retrospective framing is crucial: he knows more than he tells at first. Early in the story, he describes his son Roland’s pale complexion and the family’s relief at seeing him “begin to acquire something of the brown and ruddy complexion of his schoolfellows.” The detail seems merely parental, but it establishes a pattern of physical transformation that will later be echoed in less wholesome ways.
Notice how the narrator’s tone remains calm even when recounting disturbing incidents. He reports the appearance of a ghostly child at the garden door with the same evenness he uses for the weather. This restraint creates a tension between the events themselves and the narrator’s refusal to be alarmed—a gap the reader must fill. The effect is not unlike listening to a witness who understates a catastrophe, leaving the listener to infer the true scale.
The Portrait as a Silent Character
In the second story, “The Portrait,” the narrator shifts to his own childhood, describing a house dominated by a drawing-room that “had three long windows opening on the lawn” and a conservatory at the rounded end. The room is kept in “deadly good order,” its needlework and screens never reflecting “any living face.” The portrait itself is not described in the excerpts, but the room’s emptiness and the narrator’s childhood indifference to his absent mother create a vacuum that the portrait will later fill.
The narrator admits he “accepted, as I believe most children do, the facts of existence, on the basis with which I had first made acquaintance with them, without question or remark.” This passive acceptance is key: the portrait’s power may derive less from supernatural agency than from the narrator’s long habit of not looking. Readers should attend to what the narrator does not see—the gaps in his memory and understanding—as much as to what he describes.
Recurring Motifs: Doors, Windows, and Thresholds
Both stories use architectural thresholds as sites of encounter. In “The Open Door,” the titular door is a garden entrance that becomes a passage for the unseen. The narrator describes it with the same precision he uses for other features: “I took the house of Brentwood… for the temporary accommodation of my family.” The door is initially just another detail, but its repeated appearance invests it with significance.
In “The Portrait,” the drawing-room windows serve a similar function. The narrator recalls “looking in from the lawn through the windows upon that deadly-orderly drawing-room, with a humorous recollection of my childish admiration.” The window is a barrier between inside and outside, past and present, seen and unseen. These liminal spaces—doors, windows, conservatory thresholds—are where the stories’ tensions gather. A reader attuned to these boundaries will notice how often the narrator positions himself at a point of entry or exit, neither fully inside nor out.
The Unseen as a Domestic Presence
Mrs. Oliphant’s supernatural is not Gothic or remote; it intrudes into the most ordinary routines. In “The Open Door,” the ghostly child appears at a garden door, a place the family uses daily. The narrator’s wife and son are affected, but the story never abandons its domestic frame. Meals, walks, and conversations continue around the strange events.
Similarly, in “The Portrait,” the narrator’s childhood home is described in terms of its daily rhythms: “the cooking very good, the comfort perfect; old Morphew, the butler… and Mrs. Weir, less active, covering up her arms in sleeves.” The supernatural, when it comes, will not disrupt this order so much as reveal what was always latent within it. Readers should note how the stories embed the uncanny in the mundane—a ghost that appears at a door, a portrait that may or may not change—rather than in abandoned castles or stormy nights. The horror, if it can be called that, is the sense that the familiar has always been strange.
These two stories reward a reader who resists the temptation to classify them as simple ghost tales. Mrs. Oliphant uses the first-person voice not to confess but to conceal, and the most important information often lies in what the narrator passes over quickly. Pay attention to the spaces between events—the long silences, the rooms no one enters, the questions no one asks. The “unseen” of the subtitle may be less a matter of specters than of the things people choose not to see in their own homes.
The last time I reread The Open Door, I kept thinking how houses remember things we’ve forgotten—that same quiet ache runs through The wooing of Rosamond Fayre — Reading Notes. There’s a particular loneliness in watching a portrait hold a secret the living can’t reach. Some stories just linger, like a curtain moving in a shut room.
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